On a rainy day it was Mrs Tele’as birthday. Everyone in the other class did not know until the loud music started. Children started to crowd around Miss Tele’a .
She was Samoan dancing and loud shouts saying Choo-hoo-hoo. It was loud enough that it could blow my head off. But good enough that she was beautiful. She had a good time doing that she hasent done it before.
Malo lava Matiu! In the short piece you have written you have managed to give a good recount of what happened. You have made a good effort to make sure your recount is in the right sequence. Well done for taking part as you did. Keep working at re-crafting your work. Well done.
Malo lava Matiu! In the short piece you have written you have managed to give a good recount of what happened. You have made a good effort to make sure your recount is in the right sequence. Well done for taking part as you did. Keep working at re-crafting your work. Well done.
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