Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.
This oak tree grows in the chilly air with the shining bright light in the sky of spring.
Under the oak tree I kicked back on the Mountain from a view, chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I relax watching the children playing in the sand. Me on the tree with an awesome view of spring.
Hi Matiu! You did a great job with coming up with another sentence to add to the first one. You have the right idea in mind when it comes to creative writing. The sentence that you added really makes me imagine that I'm sitting under a tree as well. Spring is a beautiful time of the year and it's also my favorite time. Do you have a favorite season of the year? When I was your age, creative writing was my favorite style of writing. I still like to do it now. Keep up the good work!
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