This story is about Maui and his brothers tried to slow the sun down cause it was going fast.
One day, it got dark and maui couldn't eat so he could his brothers in.
The sun was going to fast and they couldn't see what he was eating
Maui and his brothers didn’t have enough time to hunt eat and fish.
So Maui and his brothers decided to slow the sun down
They made ropes out of harakeke.
Maui and his brothers had to hide from the sun so he couldn't see them.
When the sun rose, they throw rope beside him.
Maui’s brothers pulled the rope tight.
Maui began to die.
The sun begged Maui to stop because he was dieing.
Maui and his brothers let the sun go.
Now Maui and his people could eat hunt and fish.
Good effort Matiu. You've got the right idea but did you get anyone to check your work before posting it? There are a few things you need to fix. Please make sure that you get a friend to check it before you post.
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