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Friday 14 June 2013

Nick the orca

Once upon a time there lived an orca his name was Nick he was so hungry that he saw some emperor penguin’s playing tiggy.He wanted to eat them but he was so lonely so he went to look for some more emperor penguin’s. then he found some other emperor penguin’s.and nick’s best and only friend.wall nick’s friend was playing we've the emperor penguin’s. nick went looked for food. When nick was looking for food his best and only friend was looking for him.nick’s friend saw a leopard seal after it then rip the seal in half he finally he found nick then they eat.
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  1. Unknown17 June 2013 at 16:34

    Good writing Matiu. There are lots of simple sentences. We will continue learning to put speech marks and more complex sentences as well as more paragraphs.

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